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Coasting Down Craney Hill
by Marilyn Copley Hilton
My father shuts off the engine
and we coast
in neutral,
brakes diminished
down, down & down.
In the backseat I can’t scream,
can’t name the feeling—
like treading water in the trough
between waves.
My boy cousins up front egg him on,
as if no one understands
gravity is in control.
Blur green sun & shade
cricket chee unbroken
tire slap asphalt—
the same asphalt, when fresh,
my uncle skidded on as a boy,
coasting his two-wheeler,
and ran home tar blood & snot.
It’s the story our grandmother often told
fresh as this moment,
fresh as these grains of sand & salt
that need to be a shape.
I grip the seat
and the boys shout “Faster, Jim, faster.”
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